I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Raewyn it is Lacie here. Nice job on your google slide but maybe next time you could change your color of the text so it would be easier for people to read. Also next time add a sentance or two about what you had to do.
Kia Ora Raewyn, Kirsty here! I like this blog post because I like learning about earthquakes. I think you did good about researching about earthquakes. Next time you could research about tsunamis. Do you like when earthquakes happen? Bye
Kia Ora Milla here!! Great job for your age!! you did a lot of spelling! I just think you could make the colour of the text easier to see because I struggled tiny bit. - Milla
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Raewyn it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteNice job on your google slide but maybe next time you could change your color of the text so it would be easier for people to read.
Also next time add a sentance or two about what you had to do.
Kia Ora Raewyn, Kirsty here! I like this blog post because I like learning about earthquakes. I think you did good about researching about earthquakes. Next time you could research about tsunamis. Do you like when earthquakes happen? Bye
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Milla here!!
ReplyDeleteGreat job for your age!! you did a lot of spelling!
I just think you could make the colour of the text easier to see because I struggled tiny bit. - Milla