I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Raewyn. I was quite excited when I saw your Literacy class were learning about Maya Angelou. She has been one of my favourite authors since I was at high school. My friend and I used to sit at the park across the road from school and read her poetry. I have quite a few of her books too. She is an amazing person to look up to. Thanks for sharing.
Maya Angelou has inspired so many people, and now you have an insight to this inspirational woman.Abby Lee Miller (Dance moms) even choreographed a dance number for Mia to preform inspired by Maya Angelou.She has touched so many people in so many different areas of life.Good work perhaps you could double check your sentences to make sure they have good grammer and remember you can always go back and correct anything that needs correcting.Stay awesome.
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Kia ora Raewyn.
ReplyDeleteI was quite excited when I saw your Literacy class were learning about Maya Angelou. She has been one of my favourite authors since I was at high school. My friend and I used to sit at the park across the road from school and read her poetry. I have quite a few of her books too. She is an amazing person to look up to. Thanks for sharing.
Maya Angelou has inspired so many people, and now you have an insight to this inspirational woman.Abby Lee Miller (Dance moms) even choreographed a dance number for Mia to preform inspired by Maya Angelou.She has touched so many people in so many different areas of life.Good work perhaps you could double check your sentences to make sure they have good grammer and remember you can always go back and correct anything that needs correcting.Stay awesome.
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