I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Raewyn, Your doodle is so cool and Maybe next time you might want to add more writing so I will know what you used, and In Te Ara Takitini, In the hub I just want to say I know that everyone in Takitini already know how to doodle yourself but, what about the other people will know and so they can go and doodle their self, I don't want to be mean tho so I want to say That your doodle was awesome. Your friend Bea.
Kia ora Raewyn. I like the look of your doodle. Can you explain in your post about what we did and why we were doing it? What did you think of this task and your finished doodle?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Raewyn,
ReplyDeleteYour doodle is so cool and Maybe next time you might want to add more writing so I will know what you used, and In Te Ara Takitini, In the hub I just want to say I know that everyone in Takitini already know how to doodle yourself but, what about the other people will know and so they can go and doodle their self, I don't want to be mean tho so I want to say That your doodle was awesome.
Your friend Bea.
Kia ora Raewyn.
ReplyDeleteI like the look of your doodle. Can you explain in your post about what we did and why we were doing it? What did you think of this task and your finished doodle?