Cheetahs
Hi everybody, the reason why I made a cheetah slide today (on Wednesday) because I am getting ready to go to Orana Park and I am so excited to see the cheetahs because I like cheetahs oh and Phoebe is in there go and have a look. Hope you enjoy :)
Kia Ora Raewyn,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great start to an information report. Next time you could add more information to make it more interesting. But great job!
Kia Ora, Raewyn!
ReplyDeleteThis is a nice start! If you continue this, I most certainly will read the rest! But you could add more information, or organize the paragraphs into key information. Did you like making this?
From Mikayla.
Kia Ora Raewyn, I do agree with Shyla's comment but I do have more to say...
ReplyDeleteWhat was your reaction when you saw the cheetahs feasting on the deer? What made you think it was ok to put a dead animal in a slide? Other than that, I really am curious of how you are interested in cheetahs? Well I am interested in them too, just because of their sight and speed. Blog ya later
Kia Ora Raewyn,
ReplyDeleteI really like you slide that you did about cheetahs. Maybe next time you could put the explanation before the slide. Did you think about the picture were you could see the blood of the animal and putting it on there. Anyway still a great blog post.
Blog you later.
Bounjour Raewyn
ReplyDeleteThis is a great start to an information report. Next time you could add more information to make it more interesting. But great job!
Kia ora Raewyn,
ReplyDeleteI love this it is absolutely lovely, Where did you get this information from? Maybe next time you could add a bit more writing and being more descriptive with your words. That's from me bye!